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Language Features story

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In Literacy we have been looking at language features (e.g. similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia etc.)

We all wrote short detailed paragraphs here is mine.

All of the words in pink are a type of language feature, see if you can guess which each of them are.


It was so beautiful, my eyes were drawn into the pink roses I just had to smell them. I was looking around at the beautiful park, it was as if it was made out of gold it was so precious, I loved it here, it was my favourite place on earth. It has luscious green grass that is so soft you could just float down and lie there forever. I gazed up at the fluffy white clouds, they were as white as snow shaped like all different things. Out of the corner of my eye I saw a big orange truck cutting down my favourite tree, what? Why? what where they doing to the park? These thoughts were rushing through my pounding head. This is a crisis, a mega crisis! In fact, it’s a twelve story high crisis, with a magnificent entry and a big sign on top saying this is a crisis! What do I do next? How do I stop them? The chains were so close, vibrating and travelling at the speed of light, an inch away I shouted at the top of my lungs STOP! BANG! there was nothing I could do now, it was gone.




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